Friday, 15 January 2010

Of Sonnet and Consideration



Let us be ourselves, yet not be doomed
As the honest admit of my blunders.
Though time has done its work of making me bloomed,
I am still a learner, slowly capturing the greatness of Wonders.


I do feel sad as I can't swim as fast as the rest,
But I kept working on the moves to reach the pebbled shore,
For each wave is sequentially struggling with its best,
Forcing me to get a grip & survives after the hits before.


Don't let me drown,
Don't let me walk alone,
Never let annoyance wins your frown,
For each of us blooms in our own time zone.


And thus I hope he will give you the light to see,
Realizing thy worth too, doesn't come easily.




5 comments:

mrskzee said...

oiyoyo shakespeare~

Valossa Vicious said...

Good one Nui! Nuispeare perhaps? ;p

N3_XieRRa said...

Bebeh: aiyoyo...haha just trying my luck here.. time emo ba ni..ada incident..;( ( but not en. Adi la )

Joe: Good ke joe?cam bidak je..byk aku inject unsur shakepeare ni sbb blur and tgh diselubungi sonnet 60 juga..;p tp tq for the compliment..Im trying to enact the poem part in me...envy tgk korg hebat je bab2 creativity n words nih..hehe
p/s: sir kieran dares us to write a sonnet. jd bjayala aku wpun ngek..hehe

Anonymous said...

i like ur poem..so berbahasa :D

N3_XieRRa said...

weeee..tq van...berbahasa cene tu? tp agak stret forward oso ni..inspired by Shakespeare n the "incident"...huhu still can't be compared to you guys juga...sgt mantap...hehe